romance otaku

Agreed, you have some pretty good imagery going. I felt like you portrayed your ideas perfectly. I just wish there was a little bit more of a rhythm... Oh well, ...

I really did like this poem, but like the others said it is really forces. I would suggest leaving the rhymes, and going to freestyle. That is if you can't ...

Hey Romance Otaku! I think Inkwell pretty much summed it up. I really like this poem, and I must admit that I look at homeroom that very way, sometimes. I ...

I like it ^-^. But don't things that are over-stuffed explode? Just a thought... Makes me wonder who you were writing about. Besides that, it's a great poem with a ...

Not many fantasy/paranormal fans around here, are there? Oh well... The idea was based around the "Chasing the rainbow in the sky" line. The idea was that it was about ...

I just revised the poem. How is it now?

Thanks so much for your review ^-^. I will try to check out your stuff tomorrow. I am currently working on a report XD.

Thanks ^-^. Wow, I didn't even notice the "glare" thing XD. Oh well. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece ^-^.

Thank you for your review ^-^. Thanks for catching those few typos, and I will take your suggestions into consideration. I also thought that it should be longer have add ...

Thanks for catching those mistakes. I read it like three times and didn't see those XD. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks to both of you for your reviews! If you ever need anything reviewed, just let me know. I am a bit greedy, though, so I would like it if ...

hey daft ^^ i am not very far into the next chapter, and am not sure when i will post it, but in the meantime you can check out my ...

of course it helps ^^ its nice to get an only-positive review once in a while, im almost done with chapter 3. here is the links you may want to ...

you may want to check out the edited version of this

thank you. i am doing my homework, you know; reading more books and all that happy crap. the way i write is pretty messed too. i go through drafts and ...